I'm also using the new Grid UI to overhaul Shattered Pixel Dungeon's journal notes page! The automatic adventuring notes, which record keys and landmarks, are now presented in a much more compact form! I've also added a few new landmarks, such as special floor types.
You might notice that there are a couple of other new things in this UI as well, more on that next week...
(Image description: An image showing the new 'adventuring notes' UI in the journal on the left. Notes are organized by dungeon floor with icons the player can tap for more info. On the right two example note descriptions are shown)
That's awesome! Showing icons are great. I have to say, though, I'd really rather have it be less compact. Just show each floor as a separate line and don't bunch them up. I've always had a hard time reading lists that ascend or descend by going left or right before going down. Examples:
6 5
4 3
2 1
Is harder to scan than
6 3
5 2
4 1
These simple examples are both really easy to read. I'm only trying to explain what order I mean. It gets harder to parse when the list items are variable width like filenames or these icons.
I'd really rather just have:
6
5
4
3
2
1
Especially since it looks like there's going to be a variable number of floors per line based on how many icons each needs. A single column would be much easier to parse visually, and scrolling isn't a bother. It would work much better if all the icons lined up in neat columns.
I really appreciate all you do for this game! I do hope you reconsider the layout of the list.
I went back and forward on this in development before settling on the more compact view. I do agree that this can result in reduced readability, but I felt it was worth it compared to making the player scroll a whole lot to access earlier floors. I made this choice partly because the lack of compactness makes the current list UI totally unusable, and moving to the grid's main goal is to address that. Using one floor per row would also be especially bad in landscape where there's roughly twice the horizontal space and half the vertical space.
I would like to give a little more info on score in the future, but this isn't really the feature for that. Landmarks mainly automatically note things which you'd care about remembering between floors, such as an alchemy room. Secret rooms aren't noted at all. I agree that a similar UI could be used to break down missing things by floor, but I wonder if just noting them would be sufficient, compared to doing something like showing where they were on the map.
Knowing the floor is probably enough, if the player wants, replay the seed on no chal and just magic map the floor might be enough to figure out what they missed