@laurence I just read Houseproud and it's the best short form science fiction I've read in years. Your d
@laurence I just read Houseproud and it's the best short form science fiction I've read in years. Your d
@laurence I just read Houseproud and it's the best short form science fiction I've read in years. Your dialogue is top notch. May I have your permission to post it on the community magazine I mod - @13thFloor?
@Arotrios Sure, go ahead. It's been reprinted several times already. You can link my website, https://laurencebrothers.com.
I like the story myself, but I'm a little surprised it's gotten so much traction. I suppose there's something about Domus's earnest sweetness that appeals....
@laurence Thank you! I'll forward a copy of the post when complete.
Regarding Houseproud, aside from the quality of the writing, there are two dynamics that really make it stand out to me. First off, the humanization of Domus is rendered with a tenderness reminiscent of Bradbury's "There Will Come Soft Rains", but at the same time your dialogue provides an emotional depth that goes far beyond the simple sadness of the house in "Rains".
Secondly, and most importantly, unlike Bradbury, your story is one of hope, not despair. It leaves the reader in a better place than where they began. It's a gem - if Gardner Dozio were still around, I'd expect to find it in this year's The Years Best Science Fiction Anthology.
@Arotrios Thanks so much for the kind words!
@laurence - here's the link for your review - please let me know if you'd like me to edit anything or add information, and thanks again for a great story.