More progress on my hanging script

I really like this writing system (first posted here) but i didn't feel like making a full language out of just humming. I'm satisfied to know that it's (theoretically) possible so i've adapted my script to include some different sounds. The spoken language has a long way to go before it's usable but this writing system is already pretty much done, unless i decide to change some letters or add more characters to fit between words.

Now vowel characters alternate being on the left and the right, with the bottom one always on the left. The no-vowel character (far right in the vowels) is used when the last sound in a word is a consonent. Consonents can connect to the vowel bar on either side, but must connect to the bar above where all the characters after that sound connect. It reads top to bottom, left to right, so the characters have to be written top to bottom in order, but bits of them can cover the same horizontal space as long as the connection points are in order.

Hyphens are used pretty much the same way as in English; to connect the two halves of a long word or to connect to words that are sort of a single word already. The and symbol (&), comma, and question mark are used pretty much the same as their existing counterparts.

Here are some example sentences to show off what text in this language will eventually look like. They were drawn before i decided to include /ə/ and rhotic vowels (the second vowel bar from the right). I made some errors in the IPA transcription, so if you try to read it yourself and something doesn't line up right, that might be on me.

This script is still unnamed (it's just filed as "lang05" on my computer) so if anyone has name suggestions, i'd love to hear them.